Sunday, May 28, 2006

Carnations

secretive floral planners
they achieve little

pay while floundering
in factories

or they knot in shows, cheap
chorus girls overworked

underpaid, bare-breasted
bodies trained to look

good standing.

1 comment:

Ariel Gordon said...

I appreciate the knotty density of this poem, though I felt more at ease in the second half...