Lights Out
Sometimes you just have to leave
the dishes in the sink
and go on to bed
with no regrets. Bowls
will wait and not shrivel
for lack of water or soap.
New flats of perennials pause
in the warm night, parked on the porch,
dry soil soaked in cool water,
drenched as soon as I got them home,
but still dry out as mosquito air sucks
everything up into already soaked
stars lurking in the clouds. I’ll
need whatever juice I can muster
to rise early before the shovel of heat
hits me alongside the head
and sends me staggering back
inside. It’s a race to dig and drop
starter sets of salvias, thyme
and gaillardia – before
the sun begins baking the soil
into an overdone cake. My skin
feels hot as a done muffin. I spent
too much time in the melting
glass house picking only
what I need and can pay for—
sweat showering me in
lavender rivulets,
dizzy green swimming
through the offerings.
The living wins this round—
dirty can just wait.
3 comments:
Hey Myra,
I feel whiplashed by your images (mosquito air / shovel of heat / melting glass house) and I like it...
Strong opening, love "shovel of heat" and "picking only what I need and can pay for". The honesty and clarity of this poem. My only suggestion would be to rework the end of the second stanza to simplify it a bit. There's a lot of dry/water/drenched/dry that goes back and forth. I pause there to puzzle in an otherwise straight through, evocative poem. Like how dizzy green echoes into dirty. Like last two lines as ending.
Ditto what Ariel and Bren said, and I really liked these lines "to rise early before the shovel of heat/hits me alongside the head/
and sends me staggering back".
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