I love it, Joanne!! This is a very different voice for you, isn't it? Again, I love surprises & the piano in the pickup - it's the kinda stuff you can't make up (?) or has that feeling to it anyhow. Beautiful balance here. There were just two places that felt a touch stumbly to me: a nagging problem...a touch too detached? (this problem, a problem nagging at you..??) And, That's just life (that's just how it goes..?? something more tangible)
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Joanne!! I really like this poem.
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I love it, Joanne!! This is a very different voice for you, isn't it?
Again, I love surprises & the piano in the pickup - it's the kinda stuff you can't make up (?) or has that feeling to it anyhow. Beautiful balance here.
There were just two places that felt a touch stumbly to me: a nagging problem...a touch too detached? (this problem, a problem nagging at you..??)
And, That's just life (that's just how it goes..?? something more tangible)
Wonderful!
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