A site for May Day, an effort of poets from Winnipeg and beyond, taking place for the eleventh time in May 2015.
Saturday, May 12, 2007
seven
substitution 12
The green infestation of inchworm arching after newleafnewleafnewleafnewleaf for the white slivers of nail you won’t let me clip as you reach for me again andagainandagainandagain
I love this series, Ariel. This one is very strong. I love that I'm able to see growth and seasonal change between the others and this. It's lovely and quiet.
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I love this series, Ariel. This one is very strong. I love that I'm able to see growth and seasonal change between the others and this. It's lovely and quiet.
I like the repetition--it works well with the green worm inching along, very visual. Nice.
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