Saturday, May 12, 2007

seven

substitution 12

The green infestation of inchworm
arching after newleafnewleafnewleafnewleaf
for the white slivers of nail
you won’t let me clip
as you reach for me again
andagainandagainandagain

2 comments:

kerryan said...

I love this series, Ariel. This one is very strong. I love that I'm able to see growth and seasonal change between the others and this. It's lovely and quiet.

Tracy Hamon said...

I like the repetition--it works well with the green worm inching along, very visual. Nice.