Friday, May 05, 2006

cat poem

Bajeebers, two poems behind already. *puts nose to grindstone*

Hang, we call it, her little
carry-on of fur and flab
pendulously swinging beneath
her belly. She's become too fat
or middle aged to be efficient - when
she jumps it's not athletic,
she doesn't make it look easy, you
can tell she's working hard, breaking
a sweat getting up to that chairseat.

Still, she's ageing gracefully, getting
greyer around the edges, making
no bones about her love of drowsing
in the sun. She's more likely to muscle
onto your lap than attack your feet.
When you pet her, she falls down,
turns over with a grunt, exposes the long
chubby line of belly. The move
is still endearing, the way she looks
at us, willing us to hold up
our end of the bargain.

Cats are not gods, Egyptian or
other, they aren't wise, they don't
know secrets we don't know, except
ones about the death of small squeakers.
This cat is foolish and silly, she is a terrible
shedder, she has kitty dandruff. Her tail
is too short. She is terrified of other cats,
even ones half her size. Every day
she teaches me
things I already know. Trust
is beautiful, love needs
no reason, and
surrendering dignity
is optional.

3 comments:

Ariel Gordon said...

Hey Karla,

Though I'm generally not a fan of poems-about-pets, this one caught and held me.

The first four lines of the poem spark, they're so good ("carry-on of fur and flab" !). As are the last handful of lines of the poem - though it feels almost too sure of itself, as a statement, I can't help but admire "Every day she teaches me things I already know."

Nice.

Karla Andrich said...

The poem that comes out so close to perfect that all it needs is a bit of editing is a rare beast with me. I think there are good bits here (the first four lines are one of them) but on the whole I'm pretty sure that this will end up as a donor to other, better poems. :)

bee said...

Love "hang". Agree with Ariel about the strong parts. Wonder if this poem could be much shorter and still say all it needs too. Great line "Everyday she teaches me things I already know." Perhaps as the last line?