Friday, May 20, 2011

Waking

An amateur's new reflex camera,
a joke to get them laughing.
An instant clipped from a sumer afternoon.

Who are they? I ask.
They're in a field, row of trees behind them
Skirts to their ankles, white blouses.
And the men— shirtsleeves, suspenders,
hats perched high on their heads.
So easy to mistake their age.

That's Judith, Grandpa's first wife
(looking down, sun in her eyes)
and that's your grandma there
(hand smothers a giggle)

And then the figures lift a little, become
stereoscopic by some mixture
of daylight through yellow curtains,
my mother's voice reciting names,
my eyes' new skill at shifting focus.
There's the surprise:
my grandparents were once young.

If they could just stay like this,
resting lightly on the Kodak paper.
Are there more? I ask.

1 comment:

m said...

I like the tone here--not quite nostalgic, not quite sentimental. I like the details of the wives, though with their actions I had a to reread it to be sure that it was the women in the photo being described and not the narrator or her mother.

The final stanza seems to be missing something for me. An extra beat? Subtext? Not sure, but I want more for the end.