just like
you're just like leonard cohen,
the way you bring my groceries in,
though you lack the old man cap,
the dark slant, the manners
but you do him better,
pushing the cart and paying the bill,
stacking the cans of beans in the cupboard,
balancing the avacado and tomatoes
you'll never sing my name,
won't make me into a poem,
but you kiss me in the dairy aisle
like he would, like it's the only item on the list
2 comments:
I like it. I wanted to see more of this poem. Did you hear Leonard on CBC Monday morning? What a great voice.
Thoughts on the last line: what if it read "like I'm the only item on the list"?
yeah, i wanted to see more of it too, but it was a little quicky on a busy day. Like your suggestion for the last line. Thanks!
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