Thursday, May 18, 2006

When words roll through my head
like cattle through a dusty trail
in a distant canyon land
I can almost hear the calling back and forth
the insistent moaning as they travel
on their way to slaughter
hesitant to arrive anywhere
and so plod on at their own pace
herded with great difficulty
from one point to another.
A snake’s rattle or telephone ring
can send them all stampeding.

2 comments:

Ariel Gordon said...

Hey Myra,

What an interesting observation / description of the process of writing!

My only caveat is that I feel like I need the last two lines to be set off a bit more - something as simple as the insertion of the word 'but' might help...

Myra said...

Yes, Ariel, good point. Thanks for that.