Sunday, May 11, 2008

How to name people of taste

You hike alone,
away from a stream of words,

or those wanting an ear—
past the shopping cart

abandoned, rusted metal,
the red plastic handle tilted

at an odd angle, this twisted
body a common urban animal

screaming Safeway to the raven,
to the magpie, even an elk only yards

from a stuffed Bow river
on Mother’s day, each foot forward

feeling heavier with spring’s liquid
diet. You walk after last night’s

filling of draught beer,
the intoxicating way a young man

smiled, gathered you in
to the conversation.

There is no caution in you
as you escape to the river’s other side,

that century old hotel, an elegance
of concrete and cars, the moneyed

line-up of language
spilling like wine into your glass.

The frozen arrangement of mountains
is neatly positioned out the window,

chairs strategically paired
beside the view, and all those people

stream along, inside
out, their flow flooding

with a wonder that melts you
faster than you can say defrost.

3 comments:

SMSteele said...

oh yes, the stream of words...
I like your urban animal, the abandoned shopping cart

i like the flow flooding and the melts you with... but the wonder?

and i love the faster than you can say defrost.

T, you are totally taking me back to Banffland

kerryan said...

Love this! Especially the image of the shopping cart "screaming Safeway" and the "frozen arrangement of mountains."

Also, "There is no caution in you" is wonderful.

Anonymous said...

I too like the red plastic handle tilted, the urban animal screaming safeway. (i wonder about not saying shopping cart, but letting us puzzle it?)

like the stuffed bow river, spring's liquid diet, the line break there very clever, and there is no caution in you.

i feel like you've captured some great images, a certain tone, but i feel like this poem hasn't found its centre yet. it's well on it's way. perhaps a little order shuffling, paring?