"The more I am, the less I know
And what I do is all too much"
George Harrison
you take a piece and
then an
other
and it's all too much
like he said it was
so take a piece but not too much
because I am
sinking.
I want to float,
be filled without drowning.
Flooded by your needs
I am
sinking
and it's all too much
it's all too much
you know...
2 comments:
I like the way you broke up an/other near the beginning
More of the drowning singking flooding imagery maybe? (if it's not too much to ask)
You got it.
(30 hours of work in 48 & a run in with a stomach flu..I just want to be writing!!!)
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