Wednesday, May 12, 2010

ritalin, a love story

1.

how do they do it, the mothers?
needles soar and dive, the whir of hands,

fingers buzz with joy. while you can only dream
of movement, drift, hunch and squint

bones plodding in the dark. somewhere
there's a mother who enjoys this, lies

beneath heaps of laundry, dirty dishes
mending with some twisted smile. recall

your career once more industrious
than your washing machine. recall

how your husbands hand's could cup
and grab. now you wear

his old shirts, invisible breasts
pressed like pancakes by the weight

of squirming children. your body,
this defeated thing the day drags

behind. you think: just one gulp,
the swish of liquid, two

spots
of grace.

2 comments:

andie said...

I remember this episode...it was terrifying

kerryan said...

Wonderful title and lovely use of the couplets. I like how it gives sort of a light, airy feeling to this piece to contrast the dark content. I like the structure and surprise of the last two stanzas, too.

Will there be other parts to this piece? (after 1.)