Saturday, May 14, 2011

Common Era

My friend's kid tells me all about
the eras of existence on the planet:
Crusty ol' Crustacious,
Early Jurassic,
then, because we'd already run out of names,
the Late Jurrassic
and then, the Great Extinction.

To him it's all abstract -
the era when his mom and I were roommates
might well be about as far back as T Rex.
And I've survived through many more eras since
with my tough hide and sharp claws.

The Flirtacious, the Kick-my-assic,
then I killed off every single thing I knew
one by one
sent them to the ground to become
after a millennium or so
oil or diamonds
all the more valuable
for having been buried.

While I wait
for new forms of life
to emerge on my planet
I guess I'll just keep on
what the kid says we're doing,
living in the Aftermath.

3 comments:

kerryan said...

I really like the premise of this poem, the opening stanza and the naming of one's own "eras," but I think this could be boiled down quite a bit. (Specifically "sent them to the ground...buried") And I wonder if the last stanza could be condensed a little: "Now, I wait for new life to emerge/as the kid says,/live in the Aftermath" Just a thought.

Tracy Hamon said...

Hi Polly!

I like the idea of this as well, and I agree with Kerry that this poem can be parred down quite a bit--you show and tell in spots and as a reader I just want to be shown.

I also wonder if you can't push this a little more? Why is the naming of eras important?

bee said...

I too enjoyed the premise and humour in this poem. I agree it could be pared down a little. I wonder about pushing the third stanza more - this feels like where the heart of the poem is, but I want more from it. One question I have is what causes our own extinctions and how do we survive them, how do they make us stronger?