Sunday, May 18, 2014

millefiore 8

roses of May
fuchsia peonies
the tender scent

4 comments:

andie said...

I like that scent is engaged

Ubu Loca said...
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Ubu Loca said...

I like micro poems
but you could add a punchline:

Like:

".............sent
won't pay the rent"

Joanne Epp said...

I like the sound of "tender scent"

Comparing peonies to roses is surprising; I always think of them as big shaggy things, not as refined as roses!