if killing the buffalo off were not enough
the children were next. taken away by force,
sometimes at gunpoint, forbidden to speak
the language of their home, hair shaved,
moccasins burned, sister separated
from brother, the children
were taught well the shame
of being brown. closeted,
strapped, starved, beaten
and worse.
ignored by day, unwelcomed
attention by night. half-naked
brown wooden Jesus on the cross
bearing the sins of all. their new
saviour having descended to the dead
for only three days
it was hard for the children
to reconcile that with the ten
or more months of the year
spent burning in perdition
all to take the Indian
out of the child, the child
out of the Indian:
of these two cultures
one was surely
savage
1 comment:
I wonder if you need all the material in the first stanza and a bit-- I know it's all part of the story, but I wonder if you need it all in this poem. The really strong part begins at "half-naked/ brown wooden Jesus"-- the contrast between the three days/ten months, and then the ending, which is so striking.
I didn't see this at first, but the description of Jesus as brown somehow heightens the distance the children feel between themselves and him.
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