Does skyblind mean blind from looking at the sky or blind to the sky, or is it reference to the Star Wars ship? Who is the you? The placement of constant and shining makes it modify I - is that what you intended? The idea of losing the moon while counting stars is intriguing, but I'd like more.
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Does skyblind mean blind from looking at the sky or blind to the sky, or is it reference to the Star Wars ship? Who is the you? The placement of constant and shining makes it modify I - is that what you intended? The idea of losing the moon while counting stars is intriguing, but I'd like more.
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