Maroon sits darker in my head
than red, that mere beginning of blood
but not the darker shade it wears
when spilled or smeared
off sharp blades
or dried
onto smooth clean surfaces
reflecting operating lights.
Maroon seems just the right
mix of lead and air to paint
curves inside a hollowed cavern
left with only half its load.
Maroon is browned crimson
changed by exposure –
outside air never intended
to touch the soft recesses
of factory flesh where
so much work and chaos
tremble beneath maroon wounds.
5 comments:
What an effective meditation, Myra. Very nice...
Somehow I just see congealed blood everywhere without you ever saying such a thing. I think this is quite bloody brilliant!
Touching..I especially find stanzas 3-6 effective/evocative.
marjo
Thanks for the feedback. Maroon is also the color of the absent kidney, which I worked around Not saying and came up with this.
Maybe I'll use it in my reading later this month.
I like this piece. The only thing I found jarring was the word maroon in the last line. It may be more effective to leave it implied.
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