A site for May Day, an effort of poets from Winnipeg and beyond, taking place for the eleventh time in May 2015.
Friday, May 08, 2009
Evening, (iii)
31 words (on the subject of hope) in the month of May:
+ He left her that spring, the day a warm brackish breeze had delivered seeds to her garden and hope seemed to float eternal on the tangerine-crimson sun that set past eight. .
1 comment:
sms
said...
nice. the only word that stuck out was 'warm'... I don't know what brackish means but I'm thinking it should suffice to describe the breeze
1 comment:
nice. the only word that stuck out was 'warm'... I don't know what brackish means but I'm thinking it should suffice to describe the breeze
could you give us an image for hope?
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